My Short Story, Plots, and etc.

My story will be about two brothers surviving the land from Las Vegas, Nevada to Tokyo, Japan. They will cross the deteriorated rock they still call earth. They will be hunted down, accused of many things, framed, put through trials to test their strength, intellect, speed, and etc. Things will be tough in this multi terrain world. They will go on a mission to find out who they really are and to find answers about their past.

Many obstacles will be put in their way. Like mutant bugs, wild animals, abominations, even other people. The life of Will and Marco will be difficult. In the dark world they call home will they ever find the light to recuperate from the past and resurrect their future?

Response to " A Very Old Man With Wings"

The story itself was ok but there was some difficulties. Like how bad the people treated the old man and how much pain they put him through. He did nothing to them and they treated him like garbage. They were going to send him on a boat with food and water that would last him three days. It was a miracle they didn't do it.

Not to add insult to injury the towns people also threw garbage and other objects at the old man to get excitement from him. The people were horrible doing something so mea And yet through it all no one helped the old man.



40 min of reading Enders Game.

Reading Response

The short stories I've read were weird but interesting. I learned words that I didn't know even existed. Like malevolent. Some of the stories keep me interested but sometimes get on my bad side. Some of the things most characters do make me mad. But other than the characters the setting, is interesting and so is the plot.

Marco's Thoughts

" What are we doing? Were chasing a ghost. Some one we don't know whose even still alive. I don't know. Will doesn't know. I think I might be going insane. The longer were out here, the more likely the chance we might die. We don't even know where were going. Were being hunted down, accused of murder, theft, and kidnap. There is no way this can get any worse. O wait. Yes it can. Were low on food water and ammo. We lost our map, Will is suffering from a cold, and I can't tell what's real or what's fake."


" It doesn't matter. I promised Lou we'd bring his daughter back. Not only that but I promised my self and Will we'll find our sister, and the people who killed our parents. No matter what it takes I will find them. I will kill them. Even if it means me ripping this land bit by bit. I will destroy who ever gets in my way. But I won't be careless doing so. I have to remember what I do reflects on me and my brother. If I kill someone word could get out that we can't be trusted. Then again who can be trusted?."

Ender's Game

I was reading a very great book. It was called Ender's game. Its hard to explain but if you go and read it, it will be amazing. Its starts of with this kid named ender. He's bullied in the first couple of pages but later in the story he goes out to space. He trains with other people to become the best. I would still be reading it but I misplaced the book. If any one finds it tell me. Its a very good book.

The Talk of Liars

" Hey did you see that explosion last night." says one liar. "Yeah I did." lies the other guy. " I was there. Didn't you see me fly out of the explosion." "Yeah. I was the one that saved you." "That's right you did." As the two liars began to lie to each other making up a false story that never happened one soon realizes that none of it happened.

A Helping Hand

A couple of days ago I asked for help for my classes and school work. I talked to miss Pension and she said she would get some seniors to help me. Not only am I asking my teachers for help I have some school mates helping me out to. The work load is big but a helping hand from my peers and teachers is a great thing.